I am a Year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson, Ms Naicker and Ms Kirkpatrick.
Monday, 16 May 2016
Shoe Narrative
L.I: To Use the 5 sentences and personification to help us paint a picture with words.
I can see the sunlight flashing in my eyes, as I was woken up. All of a sudden I heard footsteps coming closer and closer to my box. I felt depressed as the owner of me jumped right inside. I went outside and the sun was glancing in my eyes then I heard a voice, ‘the voice was screaming “You guys come closer we don’t bite”. We knew that it was a bad idea to go closer towards the puddle of Mud.
Last week we had to Complete our narrative this narrative is about shoes you have to make it like the shoes are alive and describe them.
Labels:
writing
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
No comments:
Post a Comment