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Tuesday 1 March 2016

DRAFT

L.I To write a stretched sentence.
L.I To use DRAFT to check our sentences.


Who: The little girl Jumped.

What: The little girl jumped Far.

When: As the sun fell the little girl jumped far]
Where: As the sun fell the little girl jumped into the pond.

Why: As the sun fell the little girl jumped far into the pond trying to hide from the dark shadow creeping closer and closer.

As the sun fell the little girl leaped far into the pond, trying to hide from the dark shadow creeping closer and closer.

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