I am a Year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson, Ms Naicker and Ms Kirkpatrick.
Well done Mya. Your use of action for the hook grabs my attention and makes me want to keep reading. You have explained the characters, setting and problem.
Well done Mya. Your use of action for the hook grabs my attention and makes me want to keep reading. You have explained the characters, setting and problem.
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